6 thoughts on “Lies in Amateur Porn”

  1. Brigit Delaney says:

    Beautiful. I love the “s” sounds throughout – lovely images, too.

    1. Harper Eliot says:

      Thank you! I am a fan of alliteration. Glad it’s working.

  2. Djaevle says:

    “displaying point of contact”

    A simple, yet beautiful line.

    Displaying a point of context…

    1. Harper Eliot says:

      First line I wrote, I think. Thank you… and it’s nice to see you here!

  3. Chifor says:

    beautiful poem, simple lines – .. and stole my orgasm

    1. Harper Eliot says:

      Thank you!

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