Lies in Amateur Porn

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Lies in Amateur Porn

Stole in at starlight,
Unravelled sinew from sheet.
He stared at slightness.

Assuming I was safe
- told true darkness is gritty -
Thought you forgot but

she twisted her wrist,
Displaying point of contact
and stole my orgasm.

  6 comments for “Lies in Amateur Porn

  1. 11/05/2013 at 04:49

    Beautiful. I love the “s” sounds throughout – lovely images, too.

    • Harper Eliot
      18/05/2013 at 21:32

      Thank you! I am a fan of alliteration. Glad it’s working.

  2. 18/05/2013 at 00:17

    “displaying point of contact”

    A simple, yet beautiful line.

    Displaying a point of context…

    • Harper Eliot
      18/05/2013 at 21:31

      First line I wrote, I think. Thank you… and it’s nice to see you here!

  3. 27/08/2013 at 01:54

    beautiful poem, simple lines – .. and stole my orgasm

    • Harper Eliot
      27/08/2013 at 08:03

      Thank you!

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